comments 4 duckling!

Comments 4 edmund wee swan way's masterpiece

don proud of tat pls,
cos it's nt super duper hard to do tat.

lols.



the cover page
~ NOT enuf attractive
~ shud bold / italic the title
~ shud hv more colourful bckground

ur overall --
em....
~ Larger font pls
~ ur pic inside is nt tat attractive lah
~ ur subtopics shud put special bit.
~ ur arrangement not creative at all, too segi empat!

i would like to gv u 14/20 (70%). . ur masterpiec average ony, u deserve for grade B!!

hey, nyway. .
i jus gvin my own opinions and comments.
pls b open minded towards it!
don get hurt. .
blah!hehe